Submission, part I

Damn, something massive happened here.

So, after a really long hiatus, caused by loss of inspiration, work and other interests, I'm returning back to 's, 's and mine, Warhammer 40k saga of ultimate Gary-stuness! Torturer and his warband finally makes planetfall on the New Badab, the domain of the Red Corsair's leader Huron Blackheart, in an attempt to stall their pursuers and gain the favor of the Tyrant himself.

I've written two parts of the story I was intended to write in this segment, and this is the first part, with the second to follow this week, I hope. Shit's big, I warn you - and being not very action-y, which was what cause the hiatus. But still, this moves the story forward, and I'm precisely and specially proud of myself in attempting to write out New Badab and Huron Blackheart in a non-faggy way of Konan the Barbarian novels other official 40k writers do.

So, get some patience through this talk-n-walk part, it's awesome as it is, and the action would soon roll out.

Yes, I understand - it's a big story, full 17 pages of Arial 12 text, but - I really worked on this hard for months, and this is like a stone off the shoulders, so I would really like some input beyond "lol nice"

Lol nice and good jorbs would be deleted on spot, as well as you idiotic informance of "I didnt read but I still comment". Sorry, fucks.

So, enjoy and note me about mistakes)